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2010年英语四级考试写作快速提高指南
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关键词: 英语四级考试 写作手法 六级作文 Thereisnodenyingthat 插入语 the 句型 however 南京工程学院 of
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高分作文标志

1:是否长短句交叉;

2、是否会使用插入语;

3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;

4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;

5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:

1.适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpay attention to而用Attention should be paidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:Itis,therefore, high time that some applicable approacheswereimplemented by the service industry like that. Bydoingso,its competitive edge will be sharpenedeffectively.

2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。

如however / therefore /forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。

比如说:Otherindividuals, however, take the attitude that …

3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad, many, thing, think,

people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carryout, sharpen one’scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I ( By Simmy )

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling daywhenmy mother bought me a computer as birthday present, whichexerted atremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself ingooglingan army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy asea ofmelodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feelingthatthe whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替换 very

thrilling 替换 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination onsb替换 sb. be interested in sth.

google 替换 search

an army of 替换 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessedtheincreasing popularity of computers. Coincident with theadvancementof science and technology, computers pouring into thecurrentsociety as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is noexaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, inlargemeasure!

The dawn of the new centurywitnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasingpopularity替换 more and more popular

Coincident with…非常地道的句型,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换With…

Advancement 替换 development

Pour into ( flood into / swarminto)替换 enter into

Current ( currently )替换 now

Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. beinterestedin sth.

Growing individuals 替换 moreandmore people

It is no exaggeration tosay经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的

For a start, we can, freely, searchdesiredinformation at any moment . Little by little, our knowledgewill bewell enriched, and our horizons will be greatlybroadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online bychatting,playing games, or delivering email.

For a start 替换 To begin with

We can, freely,search用了插入语的写作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, andourhorizons will be greatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动

Additionally 替换 In addition/Besides

Deliver 替换 send

There is no denying that , however, computerscann in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especiallythegrowing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging onthescreen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that , however, computerscann in the disservice of humanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型,还有however作为插入语,nin the disservice of 替换 do harm to

Emerging 替换 appearing (fading替换 disappearing )

Netcitizen网民,属于精彩用词

As a classic proverb goes that no garden hasnoweeds. Computers do play a positive role in the developmentofpeople lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. Weshould,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid theoppositefacet.

No garden has no weeds 替换Everycoin has two sides

Computers do play,do强调

Positive 替换 important /good等

A slice of 替换 a part of

Unfavorable 替换 bad

Impacts 替换 effects/influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入语

Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects替换disadvantage ) Facet 替换aspect

来源: 考试大

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